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One Touch

Nancy Lynn Rodriquez 1965 (Temple)

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                One Touch
      By Nancy Rodriquez

One Touch from you , and I melt like butter ,
This is what your love does to me ,
Everything on my body begins to relax and my mind rids itself from the clutter ,
All I can do is have faith , and believe ,
Every time we meet love ,
It brings us closer as we want to be ,
The passion is way off of the charts ,
We get lost and go wherever we want to go ,
It feels natural to explore every place near and far ,
As our bodies stay in sync  we know ,
Our lives are as ever sweet  as can be ,
The world falls away ,
As we have endured the longest journey to get to the here and now.

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Love for my twin flame

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Written on February 17, 2024

Submitted by txpoet65 on February 17, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX ABAXXBXCXCBXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 631
Words 136
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 2, 13
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! "One Touch" truly captures the power of love and connection between two people. The imagery of melting like butter and the feeling of relaxation and clarity that comes with your touch is so vivid and touching.

    I love the passion and emotion that shines through in each line of this poem. It is clear that the speaker is deeply in love and appreciative of the magic that happens when they are together with their partner.

    One suggestion for improvement might be to consider playing with the structure of the poem a bit. Perhaps experimenting with different line lengths or stanza breaks could add an extra layer of depth and interest to the piece.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful expression of love and connection. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful words with the world!     
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