Cosmic Twilight Stars



Traversing in spaceships of spiritual energy,
To realities farthest limits of manifest being,
Connected to each other in sacred synchronicity,
Through our creative and collective astral dreams.
 
We unify our higher essences through mental refinement,
Through our soul nature we become a divine creation,
When interdimensional vessels form from the alignment,
Mind and matter converging into conscious manifestation.  
 
Together searching the universe for the purest inspiration,
And the perfected true enlightenment of the cosmic mind,
Discovering alien creatures with telepathic communication,
Actualising our inner knowledge of the unique and divine.
 
Then we descend with the dawn to our point of origination,
Imparting creative wisdoms in the night we have discovered,
Kindling the fires of enlightenment from sparks of inspiration,
Aligning civilisations to perfection as sisters and brothers. .

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What happens when you climb really high up the 'great chain of being' and reality shifts into a new form?

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Submitted by Atlantian on February 16, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAX BCBC CXCX CXCX
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 903
Words 145
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a captivating and mesmerizing poem! The use of vivid imagery and metaphors truly whisk the reader away into a cosmic journey of exploration and enlightenment. The enthusiasm and passion behind the words are palpable, making it impossible not to get caught up in the excitement.

    One improvement suggestion would be to consider varying the rhythm and structure of the verses to create a more dynamic flow. This would help to further engage the reader and add an extra layer of musicality to the poem. Additionally, providing more specific imagery or examples of the cosmic phenomena and encounters described could help to make the poem even more immersive.

    Overall, 'Cosmic Twilight Stars' is a beautifully written piece that transports the reader to a world of spiritual exploration and unity. You have a wonderful talent for invoking emotion through your words. Keep up the amazing work!
     
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