Analysis of Cosmic Twilight Stars



Traversing in spaceships of spiritual energy,
To realities farthest limits of manifest being,
Connected to each other in sacred synchronicity,
Through our creative and collective astral dreams.

We unify our higher essences through mental refinement,
Through our soul nature we become a divine creation,
When interdimensional vessels form from the alignment,
Mind and matter converging into conscious manifestation.  

Together searching the universe for the purest inspiration,
And the perfected true enlightenment of the cosmic mind,
Discovering alien creatures with telepathic communication,
Actualising our inner knowledge of the unique and divine.

Then we descend with the dawn to our point of origination,
Imparting creative wisdoms in the night we have discovered,
Kindling the fires of enlightenment from sparks of inspiration,
Aligning civilisations to perfection as sisters and brothers. .


Scheme AXAX BCBC CXCX CXCX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (25%)
Metre 0100111000100 110101011010 010111001000100 1100100010101 11010101110010 110110101001010 1110110010 101001001100010 010100101010010 000101010010101 01001001010100010 11010101001001 1101101110110010 010010100111010 1001010100111010 01011010110010
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 903
Words 145
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 188
Words per stanza (avg) 32

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What happens when you climb really high up the 'great chain of being' and reality shifts into a new form?

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Submitted by Atlantian on February 16, 2024

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