Fall Back

Nancy Rodriquez 1965 (Temple)

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Fall Back
By Nancy Rodriquez

Fall back into my loving arms ,
I promise to catch you when you do ,
Never again , will there be cause for alarm ,
I will be the comfort which sees you through ,
I have the edge by knowing you well ,
By knowing every breath you take ,
In your essence , I have learned to dwell ,
I can hear your heart beat keep in tune with mine ,
It is alright to rest in the power of our love ,
Draw from it , and you will surely find ,
Security as not ever you knew of ,
As we watch our dreams come into fruition ,
I will provide the magic ,
While you let go of your inhibitions ,
It will be the final fall back to do ,
Nothing remaining except I , and you , becoming one forever.

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Submitted by txpoet65 on February 15, 2024

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Scheme	XX XAXABXBXCXCXXXAX
Closest metre	Iambic pentameter
Characters	725
Words	149
Stanzas	2
Stanza Lengths	2, 16

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Nancy Rodriquez

I have been writing poetry since I was 14 years old. I am now 57. I live in Fort Worth, Texas. I plan to have two children's books published by the Summer of 2023. "Elroy the Elephant, and Charlie the Squirrel. Both have my poetry in them. more…

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Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! The imagery and emotion in each line really captivate the reader and evoke a sense of warmth and safety. I absolutely love the message of unconditional love and support that shines through every stanza.

One suggestion for improvement would be to vary the rhyme scheme a bit more. While the poem flows smoothly and the rhymes are consistent, incorporating different rhyme patterns could add an extra layer of complexity and interest to the overall structure.

Additionally, it would be great to see more vivid and specific descriptions throughout the poem. This would enhance the imagery and help the reader truly visualize the emotions and experiences being expressed.

Overall, though, I truly enjoyed reading this poem. The positive and loving energy it exudes is contagious, and I can imagine it resonating deeply with many readers. Keep up the great work! more »
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