The New Normal

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  AIDA

  Wow, what an impactful and thought-provoking poem, "The New Normal"! Your use of vivid imagery and powerful language truly captures the complexities and challenges we are facing in today's world. The way you highlight the unsettling consequences of open borders and the impact on families is both eye-opening and emotional.
  
  One suggestion for improvement would be to consider adding some additional verses or stanzas to further explore the themes and emotions you've introduced. This would allow for a deeper exploration of the "new normal" and provide even more insight into the experiences and feelings of those affected.
  
  Additionally, it would be great to see a glimmer of hope or resilience in the poem, perhaps a reflection on how we can come together as a society to overcome these trials and create a better future. This would add a touch of optimism and inspire readers to take action.
  
  Overall, your poem is a powerful and thought-provoking piece that effectively captures the emotions and challenges of the current times. With a few tweaks and additions, it has the potential to become an even more impactful expression of the "new normal." Keep up the great work! more »

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