The Gardener



Every morning, as soon as I wake,
I head to my garden with my trusty rake.
I clear the debris and water the soil,
My life as a gardener is a life of toil.

As I water my flowers, I’m planting more seeds,
Then using my hoe to get rid of weeds.
Killing the weeds can be really slow,
But it helps my flowers to grow.

There’s a variety of flowers that I tend every day,
That could be arranged into a bouquet.
Carnations, Roses, Tulips and more,
All of my flowers I simply adore.

Some flowers are old and some of them new.
They glisten in the sun with the morning dew.
All of them need water and plenty of light.
My flowers need love for them to grow right.

Too little water, or too little sun,
Could destroy all of the work that I’ve done.
Same with too much; water or shine,
The right amount of both for these flowers of mine.

Sometimes my flowers wilt on their own,
No matter how much love I have shown.
Sometimes some of my flowers die,
And I sit in my garden and silently cry.

Then my attention turns to the flowers that remain.
From tending my garden I never abstain.
You may not know it, or maybe you do,
But in someone else’s garden, I am a flower, too.
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Submitted by bkizzle on January 29, 2024

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Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ KKLL MMGG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,169
Words 262
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Brian M. King

Brian M. King, a veteran of the U.S. Navy, has been writing stories, and poems, ever since he was able to put a pencil to paper. He’s a storyteller, poet, and screenwriter. His screenplays and poems have received awards in a variety of contests. His poem, The Surfer, which is featured in his debut poetry book, Out of the Darkness, was an October 2023 contest finalist. Brian can be found jotting down stories regarding topics such as overthinking, depression, anxiety, self-love, loneliness, self-transformation, and more. Brian lives in Greensboro, NC with his dog, Rocky, and his cats, Coco and Lulu. more…

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  • katherineb.45444
    It’s very real. Has a great message hidden under one of toil and growth.
    LikeReply2 months ago
  • NubianFantabulous
    This poem has a very beautiful subject matter. The activity of perfect love in the most wholesome and innocent way. Caring, being cared for, and belonging. I appreciate how the writer switches from the Objective to the Subjective. The author is both parent and child; Server and served, Lover and loved. Which essentially, is the way of life. The circle of life. This is a lovely poetic work and I am so glad I read it. 
    LikeReply2 months ago

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