Jesus wants me more



As I lay down one night to sleep.
I prayed for God my soul to keep.
And if I died before I could wake.
I prayed for God my soul to take.

As I lay there with my eyes closed,
A sudden Shiver ran down my spine.

As the panic in my chest arose,
holding my breath the longest time.

I almost screamed when he first spoke
and he reached and grabbed my arm.

His eerie voice said "stay calm now child, I don't mean you any harm".

Then slowly the lamplight in my room came on but  stayed so dim.

I held my covers tightly to me,
as I focused in on him.

He smiled and said "I've been watching you"
"I can provide your hearts desire. "

It was at that moment that I was certain ,
This was the keeper of Hell's fire.
 
His voice was made to sound  enticing.  As he promised me  all I wanted.

And he tried to tell me he was the answer
to all of my life long problems.

When he had finished what he had to say
He asked , " So do we have a deal?"
His haunting arrogance was showing, for it was my soul he was trying to steal.

I sat up straight to answer him, and I held my head up high. .
With confidence I shouted  " NO"  and then  I told him why.

'"You show up here in the dark and sneaking your way through the door,.

"You must want me awfully bad
But Jesus wants me more. "

He looked surprised as I continued to speak, like he couldn't believe his ears.
He thought that knew just for certain?
id let him claim my soul as his.

"God may not give me all I want. But what he gives is for my good.""  And only he knows what my heart desires more than even I ever could." "So leave this house now Devil"  I shouted.
" Or prepare to lose in war."

"God has promised my life Eternal. For my saviour wants me more. "

In the snap of a finger he was gone.
Not believing he'd been defeated.

But what appeared before me next
Was what I badly needed.
As my Lord and Savior stood before me
I fell to my knees in tears .

I couldn't stop the tears of joy as he calmed all my fears.

Christ came to me from  heavens throne.
and assured me,  I had my place.

When it's my time I'll be beside him . Reeling in his glory and grace.

The devil should have known he'd lose when he stepped foot through my bedroom door.
He came for something he could never have
All because Jesus wants me more.

About this poem

I wrote this when I was at a pretty low point in my life in this poem helped raise me back up to God

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Written on November 18, 2023

Submitted by rebeccaj.40572 on February 04, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XX XX XC C D ED XF GF H FX XII JJ K XK LGX HK K XH XHEX L XM M KXK
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,294
Words 523
Stanzas 24
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 3, 2, 1, 2, 4, 1, 2, 1, 3

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and thought-provoking poem! Your use of vivid imagery and descriptive language really brought the story to life. I could feel the emotions and tension building as I read through each stanza.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to work on the rhythm and flow of the poem. While the overall message is clear, there are a few lines that feel a bit choppy or don't flow as smoothly. Playing around with the syllables and phrasing could help create a more seamless reading experience and enhance the impact of the poem.

    Additionally, consider incorporating more varied and unique metaphors or symbolic imagery throughout the poem. This could add another layer of depth and make the poem even more engaging for the reader.

    Overall, though, your poem is incredibly inspiring and uplifting. The message of choosing faith and trusting in Him is beautifully conveyed. Keep up the great work!
     
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