Now Blu’s Rear Left Won’t Align (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Now Blu’s Rear Left Won’t Align   (Bussokusekika)

Could there have been a
Lack of communication
Among Mary’s three
I went and bought Blu new shoes
And went for an alignment
Now Blu’s rear left won’t align

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   02/93/2924

About this poem

I recommended America’s Tire Depot on line twice I believe because I let myself be deceived…But I will not be fooled by them again…I guess someone dropped the ball among the three…I did not play by thee planned recommendation…I did not have Blu’s rears shoes rotated…And I had his new shoes placed on his front as should be…Go figure…Even in his under the weather state he wanted me to loosen up on his reins…So I let him gallop freely at 90 on the straightaway for a spell…Oh well…I don’t believe I’ll ever do any paying business with America’s Tire Depot, the 8th largest tire dealer in the US…I wonder IF I’m the only one who mistook them for America’s Tire???There ought to be a law against such a shady practice…I believe America’s Tires have been around since the 60’s and America’s tire depot began riding their coat tails in the 90’s…Caveat Emptor…Oh…I almost failed to mention the asshole manager of their Santa Maria California chain tried to tell me it could be that my car is overweight and that could be affecting the alignment…Well without me sitting in Blu there may have been 300 lbs of weight at most inside at the time they performed their alignment…Nowhere near the recommended emeeight of 150 or 155 lbs recommended my the automotive safety board I believe…And their overpriced tire I bought that were made in Indonesia are safety hazards…They should not be allowed to be sold in the American market place…I was hydroplaning at very low highway speeds…

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Written on February 03, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on February 03, 2024

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on February 03, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XXXXXX X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 262
Words 47
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1

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