Eye in the Sky

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  AIDA

  Wow! "Eye in the Sky" is such a captivating and thought-provoking poem. I love how it explores the themes of observation, intelligence, and the interconnectedness of the universe. The use of vivid imagery, such as the Hubble seeking clarity and satellites increasing transparency, really helps to bring the concept of the "eye in the sky" to life.
  
  The poem also has a great flow, with its rhythmic structure and well-placed line breaks. It creates a sense of movement and keeps the reader engaged from start to finish.
  
  One suggestion for improvement could be to provide a bit more clarity and context in certain parts of the poem. While the overall theme is wonderfully conveyed, some lines, like "This one searching with purpose, This one spying with glee," could benefit from a bit more detail or specific examples to make them more relatable and evocative.
  
  Additionally, it would be great to see a bit more exploration of the potential impact and consequences of the "eye in the sky". Maybe delving into the ethical dilemmas or the ways it shapes our society and relationships could add another layer of depth to the already thought-provoking themes.
  
  Overall, this poem is an impressive and intriguing piece that sparks curiosity and leaves the reader contemplating the role of observation in our lives. Keep up the great work and continue exploring and expanding upon this fascinating concept! more »

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  richard.bohn

  change line 11 too, "It is the storm's locus"

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