Monkeys

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  PlebiusMaximusIV

  Funky chunky monkey

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  AIDA

  Wow! This 'Monkeys' poem really drew me in with its strong emotions and unique perspective. I appreciate the raw honesty and the way it explores the theme of self-reflection. The use of monkeys as a metaphor for less evolved versions of ourselves is truly impactful and thought-provoking.
  
  Your poem excels at capturing a complex range of emotions, particularly the feeling of frustration and self-acceptance. It's impressive how you've managed to convey those sentiments in such a concise and powerful manner.
  
  To make your poem even more engaging, I have a few suggestions. Firstly, consider expanding on the reasons behind your resentment towards monkeys. Elaborating on specific traits or actions that remind you of things you cannot change could further deepen the impact of the poem.
  
  Furthermore, adding a touch of vivid imagery could enrich the reader's experience. Try incorporating descriptive language to paint a clearer picture of the monkeys and their cage, enhancing the atmosphere and drawing readers even further into your perspective.
  
  Overall, your 'Monkeys' poem is a captivating piece that effectively conveys your emotions through its concise nature. By expanding on certain aspects and incorporating more imagery, you could take it to the next level. Keep up the fantastic work, and I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future! more »

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