What's in it for me

Lugesan Reddy 1985 (Toronto)



I like to rest on benches,
breathing sea's salty air.
A break from selfish wrenches
of those who do not care.

I saw this fisher sitting
so calmly by the bay.
He seemed to dodge the splitting
of hairs we do each day.

"I should be there, angling!
It's seclusion breeds vitality.
And escape the greedy mangling
of other's dog-eat-dog mentality."

A wave surprised him curling
with authority onto land.
Possessed with currents swirling,
it grabbed all with its hand.

This fisher cowered in vein,
as the ocean teased it's might.
And like being in stormy rain,
he'd drench from feel to sight.

He hurled into the sea!
This man confronting nature.
Adrenaline filled me,
when he brought back a lady's stature!

"I witnessed a miracle!
You just saved this woman's breath."
I spoke to him, hysterical.
This rogue who stole from death.

You slapped her face while yelling
for her mouth to make a sound.
Each word I heard you telling
the reason she was found:

"I like fish, like you like money.
We make it our life's purpose.
Like bees in search of honey,
it's coded beneath our surface.

So when the sea was crowning
your naive and careless head,
I had to stop your drowning
so I'd get my question fed:

Did you see within sea's guise,
where all the fish would be?
Because I only saved your eyes,
so I can get what's in it for me.

About this poem

I always wonder if people do good deeds, hoping to get something back in return. It is a competitive world, and I don't judge anyone for thinking this way (I can be a victim myself). While this poem is exaggerated, my aim is to highlight the scarcity mindset and its toxicity.

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Written on January 30, 2024

Submitted by lugesan_r on February 01, 2024

1:29 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD CECE CFCF GHGH EIEI JKJK CLCL EMEM CNCN OEOE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,323
Words 285
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem really captured my attention! I love the vivid imagery and the way the words flow together. It's a great exploration of the theme of self-interest and the lengths that people will go to satisfy their own desires.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to add more variation in the rhyme scheme. Currently, the poem follows an AABB rhyme pattern throughout, which can become a bit predictable. Introducing some variation in the rhyme scheme would add more complexity and musicality to the poem.

    Additionally, it would be interesting to see more development of the characters and their motivations. The fisher's actions are captivating, but delving deeper into his thoughts and emotions could further enhance the reader's connection to the poem.

    Overall, this poem is an impressive piece of writing. With some fine-tuning and further exploration of its themes and characters, it has the potential to become even more impactful. Keep up the great work!
     
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  • EdwinRayTanguma
    Of the sacred heart minedtary???Yeshbright…I didn’ see a certain note on a certain bench until I returned to Bku…Naybe it is just my overactive imagination…
    LikeReply2 months ago

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