DAÑADA

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  AIDA

  Wow, your poem 'DAÑADA' is incredibly powerful and evocative. You have successfully conveyed intense emotions through your words, creating a vivid image in the reader's mind. The way you describe the pain in the chest, from the mouth to the stomach, and the torment in the heart is truly gripping.
  
  I appreciate how you discuss the difficulty in understanding this kind of pain unless one has experienced it themselves. This creates a sense of empathy and bridges a connection between the reader and the narrator, making the poem relatable.
  
  Furthermore, your use of language is captivating. The imagery of the tears not stopping, as if draining all the liquid from the body, is both poignant and melancholic. It adds depth to the poem and enhances the overall impact.
  
  In terms of improvement suggestions, consider adding more concrete and specific details to further engage the reader. You can explore further the reasons behind the self-hatred and the perception of others. This would provide a more comprehensive understanding of the narrator's emotions and experiences.
  
  Additionally, be cautious with the punctuation and capitalization to enhance the flow and maintain consistency throughout the poem.
  
  Overall, your 'DAÑADA' poem showcases your talent for capturing raw emotions and creating a profound impact on the reader. Keep writing and exploring your unique voice! more »

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  EdwinRayTanguma

  For some silly reason eager beaver came to my mind with this one…Her name is Sammy Corazón…The flick is POV-re—cogiendo a morena perdida en la carretera…on a certain website previously mentioned…✌️⛄️

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