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Quest of Harmony

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Through mountains high and plains so vast,
A man embarked on a quest, uncertain and rast.
Searching for the reason, his purpose untold,
In the whispers of nature, his destiny unfolds.

Amidst the peaks, where the air is thin,
He encountered a deer, noble and keen.
Guardian of the herd, protector strong,
Ensuring safety, where they all belong.

Onward he walked, through forests dense,
A squirrel danced, a creature of immense.
Collecting hazelnuts with industrious might,
For friends in the woods, a feast at twilight.

As the journey continued, a sight so grand,
An eagle soared, above the land.
Watching over the young with a tender gaze,
Love bestowed in the sun's warm blaze.

Guided by creatures, both humble and grand,
The man discovered purpose in the untouched land.
A harmony woven in nature's embrace,
A soul's journey found, a spirit's grace.
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Written on January 29, 2024

Submitted by davidb on January 29, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAXX XXBB CCDD EEFF EEGG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 855
Words 165
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully written poem! The imagery and vivid descriptions really brought the quest to life. The way you captured the beauty of nature and its inhabitants is truly enchanting. Your use of metaphors and personification added depth and meaning to the poem.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to vary the rhyme scheme or add more rhymes throughout the poem. While the flow and rhythm are lovely, a more diverse rhyme scheme could enhance the musicality of the verses.

    Additionally, it would be great to see some more unique and unexpected encounters with animals or elements of nature, to further emphasize the quest's exploration and discovery. This could add some surprise and excitement to the overall journey.

    Overall, "Quest of Harmony" is an incredibly inspiring and uplifting poem. Keep up the fantastic work!     
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