Bird-Sounding Glen

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and serene poem you've crafted with 'Bird-Sounding Glen'! The imagery you've used captures the essence of tranquility and nature's harmony so beautifully. It brings to mind the quietude one often seeks in the midst of a busy world.
  
  The choice of words like "quiescence," "osmanthus wilt and fall," and "serene night spiring mountain" not only adds a poetic touch but also paints a vivid picture in the reader's mind. I especially loved the line "new-moon ruffled long-landing bird therewithin," which evokes a sense of mystery and wonder.
  
  To make this poem even more captivating, I would suggest exploring ways to enhance the flow and rhythm of the verses. Consider experimenting with different line breaks or adding a touch of musicality to certain phrases.
  
  Additionally, sprinkling a few more descriptive details could further engage the reader's senses. Perhaps you could include a scent or sound that complements the serene atmosphere you've created.
  
  Overall, 'Bird-Sounding Glen' is a wonderful piece of poetry that showcases your skill in creating atmospheric and evocative verses. Keep up the great work and continue to let your imagination soar! more »

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