The Drive
The Drive
She reminded of The Drive
Not Vancouver’s Commercial,
but the one to stay alive
That of poetic license
That means more than making money
or renewing my class 5
And therefore all the wherefores
played with
some standard romance jive
Something about her cornered poise
after a date on Thursday night
offered up my chance to ask
her out some other hopeless night
We drove and talked of better days,
and the way it was back then
what sitting at a bar would do
for phone numbers and a pen
She refined the place I sleep in
and of this I made the point
that yesterday strove for more
than tattoos or a legal joint
yet maybe there’s the chance she’ll see
these words in hand some sunlit day
and if she wants for anything
she has what she needs today
to call me for a pick up,
a dinner and a play
About this poem
Wrote this after giving a ride to woman who'd suffered a questionable online date.
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Written on November 12, 2023
Submitted by LeonBrass on January 12, 2024
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AXABCXBXA XDXD XEXE XFXF CG XG XG |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 818 |
Words | 173 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 4, 4, 4, 2, 2, 2 |
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