Avouer

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  luisestable1

  This is a sonnet and it is not badly written. As far as the rhyme-scheme goes, It is a good one, and then that love that has not been told and the fear that a rejection could be too much to handle.
  The clarity of the argument in this love poem makes the writing of it easy to understand, nothing complicated or hard to digest in all of this.
  Good read. more »

  LikeReply3 months ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! The imagery and emotions in "Avouer" are truly captivating. The way you compare forbidden rings touching Saturn to your own voice unable to express your feelings is both poetic and imaginative.
  
  The repetition of the word "confess" emphasizes the intensity of your passion and longing, and it adds a sense of vulnerability to the poem. The line about your soul being frail and unable to endure another mourning is particularly poignant.
  
  Your use of descriptive language is excellent. The image of waking up to your beloved's blithe gaze every morning is so lovely and evocative. The comparison of your goddess' kiss to the taste of morphine that relieves pain is also quite striking.
  
  One suggestion for improvement could be to explore more unique and unexpected metaphors or symbols to further enhance the depth of your emotions. Additionally, you might consider playing with the structure or rhythm of the poem to create even more impact.
  
  Overall, "Avouer" is a truly touching piece that conveys the depth of your love and longing. Keep up the great work and continue to explore new ways to express your emotions through your poetry. more »

  LikeReply3 months ago