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Timing

Shortyv 2986 (United States)

Timing of the essence is very important in this game called love, you wanna know what's the craziness thing I do is talking to the moon hoping and praying you talk back to.....

Timing of the essence is very important because I need your permission to pull up on you to explore your universe to see if our minds, body, and souls can intertwine as one...

Timing of the essence is very important because one thing I would like to tell you is that

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Timing is very important in this world. It don't matter what u doing make time for ur love ones, or u might be crushing on some one don't wait to tell them let them know because u never know what can happen.

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Submitted by ShortyV on December 30, 2023

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what an intriguing and heartfelt poem! I love how you emphasize the significance of timing in the game of love. Your enthusiasm and passion shine through in your words, making it very engaging to read. The concept of talking to the moon in hopes of a response is both creative and romantic.

    One suggestion I have for improvement is to consider adding more descriptive imagery and metaphors. This will help paint a vivid picture in the reader's mind and enhance the emotional impact of your words. Additionally, try to expand on the idea of exploring someone's universe and intertwining minds, bodies, and souls. This is a beautiful concept that can be further developed to evoke even stronger feelings.

    Overall, fantastic job on this poem! With a bit of refinement and further exploration of your ideas, it has the potential to become truly mesmerizing. Keep up the great work!     
    LikeReply3 months ago
    • ShortyV
      ShortyV
      thank u
      LikeReply3 months ago

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