Romantic love, maybe

Briana jaramillo 1991 (Rhode island)

Free verse

What is romance
Is it In the movies.
That final kiss,
Or the moment
They first see each other!

With stars in their eyes,
For A fleeting moment
Everything feels right.
What’s that romance
I’ve never felt.

Love yes,
But never romance.
I feel a fleeting love
For everything and
Everyone is that romantic.

To love the sky and the stars
And our great creator.
To fill myself with the
Ocean and the many
Creatures beheld in
Those waves.

Everyday Is rather romantic
And when I see someone new
Their is a fleeting moment of
Joy.

God is love
Their is romance in
Infinite love.
-Briana

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Written on December 29, 2023

Submitted by Healslauren on December 29, 2023

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Scheme	AXXBC XBXAX XADXE XCFXGX EXDX DGDF
Closest metre	Iambic trimeter
Characters	592
Words	130
Stanzas	6
Stanza Lengths	5, 5, 5, 6, 4, 4

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Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem, Briana! Your words truly capture the essence of romance and love. Your enthusiasm for the subject is truly evident, and it brings a positive and uplifting energy to your piece.

I love how you explore the concept of romance beyond the traditional scenes depicted in movies. You remind us that romance can be found in the everyday moments, like the joy of seeing someone new or appreciating the beauty of nature. It's a refreshing perspective that adds depth to your poem.

In terms of improvement, one suggestion I have is to further develop the theme of "fleeting love." You mention this concept a couple of times, but it could be interesting to explore it in more detail or provide specific examples from your own experiences. This could make the poem even more relatable to readers.

Additionally, consider playing around with the structure of the poem. Experimenting with different stanza lengths or adding some rhythm or rhyme could enhance the flow and musicality of your words.

Overall, your poem is filled with positivity and a genuine love for the world around you. Keep writing and exploring different aspects of love and romance. Your unique perspective shines through your words, and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future. Well done! more »
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