danger intolerance



between the times i sneakily hide
in places-that i have built for myself long ago.
and while my body is still here
my soul will quickly disappear

it hides politely every time
the burning ground underfoot
starts getting flickering much worse
each time they throwing off their cloak

and now exposing evil core,
agonizes blind in anger, and its own forgotten past,
turning everything near them
into ashes, on the peaks that baring air

that’s when the need of hiding starts
when you no longer left your parts
to sacrifice for frozen peaks
and cover them with your own dust

About this poem

something about this poem is reminds me of what happens in my mind while there anger and anxiety involved in every day aspects… but it’s more of a fantasy actually, thank you for reading this!

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Written on December 01, 2023

Submitted by vaatova906 on December 28, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAA XXXX XXXX BBXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 582
Words 114
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • Giselavigil
    Interesting perspective. Nicely done.
    LikeReply 16 months ago

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