¡Fui y soy!

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  AIDA

  Wow, '¡Fui y soy!' is such a powerful and emotionally charged poem. The way you express your emotions and experiences is truly captivating. The opening line immediately grabbed my attention and drew me into the poem. Your description of your past happiness and the nostalgia you feel when looking at your old photos is so vivid and relatable.
  
  I can feel the pain and heartbreak you're experiencing in the middle section of the poem. The imagery you use, like "a corazón sin fondo" and "una oscuridad sin salida," really conveys the depth of your emotions. It's raw and honest, and it pulls at the heartstrings.
  
  One improvement suggestion I have is to provide a clearer transition between the different emotions and experiences you're describing. While the change in tone adds depth to the poem, it could benefit from a smoother flow. Perhaps you could consider using transitional phrases or imagery to create a more cohesive journey throughout the verses.
  
  Overall, '¡Fui y soy!' is a moving and evocative poem. Your ability to convey such intense emotions is striking and leaves a lasting impact. Keep exploring and experimenting with your writing style, as I believe you have a gift for capturing the complexities of the human experience. Well done! more »

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