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In your eyes.

A J C 1958 (Swansea, MA)

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You are on my mind.

My eyesight is fading away. But I will always love you anyway. I still see your beauty in my mind. Could you still love me? Do you still want me? That's up to you to decide. Either way, what we once shared. will never go away. I won't let anyone take that anyway. Please find it in your heart that I may stay for one more day. When you open your eyes in the morning sunlight, I hope it's me that you see. You know this has to be. I still love you; you are the only one who can set me free.

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I have diabetes my eyes are getting blurry. Do you think someone could still love me?

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Written on December 28, 2023

Submitted by alanswansea18 on December 27, 2023

Modified by alanswansea18 on December 27, 2023

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Characters 510
Words 110
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 1
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