Another Day in Hell



Wake up
Wake up
You gotta be strong
You gotta be tough

Wake up
Wake up
You’ll never be what you want
You weren’t ever good enough


Go away
Stay away
Gotta make it
Gotta deal with the day

Wake up
Wake up
It’s fine to be weak
But don’t get in a slump

Get up
Walk away
Dinner is on the table
Make yourself a plate

Eat up
Eat fast
No one can hear your thoughts
Even if you scream out bad

Wake up
Stay awake
Your dad loves you
Listen for fucks sake

If he did not love
If he didn’t care
If he never did any of these
You’d be in despair

Breathe deep
Breathe slow
It’s only a matter of time
Before you see how far you’ll go

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Written on December 23, 2023

Submitted by K_Taylor on December 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAxb AAxb ccxc AAxx acxx axxx Adxd xexe xfxf
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 643
Words 145
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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