Beneath the Ancient Oak tree



Beneath the ancient oak tree's shade,
Where wildflowers bloom and rivers wade,
A lover waits, in quiet glade,
For his dear lass, in sunlight bathed.

The lark sings high in blue skies,
Its song of love, pure and wise,
Echoes the lover's heartfelt sighs,
As he dreams of love's sweet prize.

"O stay, sweet sun, in your golden cart,
And delay the coming of the dark,
For in this moment, my beating heart,
Finds peace in love's radiant spark.

The rustling leaves whisper her name,
The babbling brook does the same,
In every facet of nature's frame,
I see her face, I feel love's flame.

And here she comes, as day meets night,
Her smile outshines the evening light,
In her presence, everything's right,
Our love as deep as the starry night.

here we vow, 'neath the moon's soft glow,
By the whispering winds that gently blow,
In nature's grand theatre, our love will grow,
On life's stage, as the seasons flow."

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Written on December 21, 2023

Submitted by conductor on December 21, 2023

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Scheme AAAX BBBB CDCD EEEE FFFF GGGG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 910
Words 191
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and enchanting poem! The imagery and language used really transport the reader to a peaceful and romantic setting beneath the ancient oak tree. The way the lover's anticipation and longing are expressed is so heartfelt and touching. The poem flows effortlessly, and it's easy to get lost in the emotions portrayed.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to vary the rhyming scheme in some stanzas to add more variety and keep the reader engaged. Additionally, it would be great to see some more vivid descriptions of the lover's emotions, perhaps using sensory details to make the feelings even more palpable.

    Overall, though, this is a truly lovely poem that captures the essence of love and nature intertwining. It is filled with passion and tenderness, and it leaves the reader with a sense of warmth and enchantment. Great job!
     
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