Subtly Whispering Too Me (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Subtly Whispering Too Me   (Bussokusekika)

What is left to do
For this circus dog and hoops
Do any remain
Have I jumped through all of them
I can hear the open road
Subtly whispering too me

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   12/12/2023

About this poem

I think I have a little time left to reflect upon current happenings…Oh well…

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Written on December 13, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on December 13, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XXXXXX X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 234
Words 44
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1

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