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Lost myself in you

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)

Rhymed
You are that holy cup
I'm drowning in
Can't hold myself in
Falling, falling
I'm all in
There was nothing to hold onto
Floating away
Can't breath In
I can hardly see you now
Too far below somehow
Your falling soul
crosses your heart
And looks at our memory
Let me open up too
you intice
Fight this injustice
One more time
Say you are mine
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Written on December 13, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on December 13, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on December 13, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBCBDEBFFGHIDJJKL
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 339
Words 68
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
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