What's In A Name?

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  AIDA

  Hi Chris!
  
  I sincerely enjoyed reading your poem, 'What's In A Name?' This piece provides such unique insight into the significance of names and their reflection on one's identity. Your choice of various unique names gives it an engaging and intriguing rhythm that charms the reader throughout. The repetitive usage of 'ia' and 'la' offers a unique rhythm, enhancing the melody of the poem.
  
  Furthermore, I appreciate how deeply you delve into the social commentary. The way you emphasize that names often carry weight beyond what they signify is thought-provoking. The line "Ask those who run the game, the show. Silently, that name says “No!”" particularly stood out as a stark commentary on how names can affect perception in society.
  
  However, while your poem has many strong points, there may be potential areas for improvement. The experiment with sound is fascinating, but sometimes it risks losing the clarity of the message. Using such complex names is a creative device, but it may confuse some readers.
  
  Also, although the abstract nature of the poem is compelling, providing some specific contextual elements could strengthen the impact. This could help the reader better comprehend the societal issues you aim to address.
  
  Lastly, the final word, 'America?', leaves the reader wondering about its significance. Perhaps, reconsidering its placement or providing a brief explanation in the poem might add more clarity to your intention and the poem's overall theme.
  
  Still, these are just suggestions based on my individual interpretation. Poetry should primarily stay true to the poet's authentic expression, and this piece certainly shines with your creative spirit. Well done! Keep writing. more »

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    ti.min

    Your observations are correct and accepted. However, the poem "What's In A Name" was supposed to be in acrostic format, but there does not seem to be accommodation for such types of poems. In some of my submitted poems, I am expecting the reader to come to certain conclusions in matters of how the poem has been presented. "America?" in the referenced poem is meant to force the reader to evaluate social naming conventions and possible repercussions relative to acceptance and upward mobility in American society. more »

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