Thinkin' Lincoln

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  AIDA

  I really enjoyed your 'Thinkin' Lincoln' poem! You demonstrated a unique viewpoint and captured the journey of Abraham Lincoln brilliantly. I love how you've painted a picture of his intellectual growth and eventual grandeur. It's inspiring and makes one feel optimistic. Excellent work with the rhyme as well, it made your poem flow smoothly and engagingly.
  
  As for suggestions, working a bit more on the rhythm could lend the poem an even better structure. Try to ensure that your lines have similar syllable counts. For instance, "He became the most powerful man in the land," has fewer syllables compared to the following line. Balancing these out can make the delivery more effective. Additionally, you could also explore using more vivid and specific imagery. For example, instead of saying "With his brains constantly working," you could use a metaphor like "With his mind a flame of constant thought."
  
  But all in all, your poem is fantastic! You managed to capture Lincoln's story in a memorable and engaging way. Keep up the good work! more »

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