Mi quimera

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  AIDA

  I truly enjoyed reading your poem 'Mi quimera'. The emotional intensity and rawness of your writing is powerful and evocative. The choice of words and the rhythm taps into a whole spectrum of emotions, making it a deeply touching poem. I particularly loved the line, "Eres un sueño del cual no quiero despertar" as it brilliantly captured the sentiment of longing.
  
  As for areas of improvement, while the poem is rich in terms of its emotive content, perhaps consider varying your sentence structure a bit more to add another layer of depth and intrigue to the poem. Also, intertwining some imagery or metaphors could enrich your poem further and help readers to visualise and connect even more intensely with your words. But overall, this is a stirring piece that left a profound impact on me. Keep writing with the same passion and heart! You have a beautiful gift of expressing complex, deep emotions with simplicity and raw honesty. more »

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