Death Follows Her



Death Follows Her

Death follows her like a cat
Meowing for a meal
Walking in between her frail legs
In figure eights
Purring with its tail up
Brushing against dried, flaking skin
Avoiding the metal walker
With yellow tennis ball shoes

“Here kitty, kitty. Are you hungry?”
“Meow, meow.”
She slowly bends down
 Stretches a trembling hand toward the bowl on the floor
While the other grasps the walker’s handlebar
The plastic bowl tilts and spills some leftover mix of kibble and wet food
“Meow, meow.” the cat slaps the pieces of kibble toward the back door.
“Shut up! Shut up!” she replies

She refills the plastic bowl
Chopping and mixing with purpose and determination
More canned wet food in with the premium formula of chicken and rice pellets
She sighs as she bends down once more offering the meal back to her companion
Painfully she moves away, slides her walker toward the kitchen table
And ever so slowly lowers herself into her kitchen chair
Her discomforting objections to the pain turning into cries
“Meow, meow.” death whispers. “Shut up! Shut up!” she replies defiantly.

About this poem

A morning interchange between my 93 year old cousin who has cancer and her cat.

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Written on September 15, 2023

Submitted by gbaranoff on September 15, 2023

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Scheme A XXXXXXAX BXXCXXCD XEXEXXDB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,115
Words 199
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 8, 8, 8

Gregory Baranoff

Gregory Baranoff was born in Shanghai, China to Russian parents and came to the United States in the early sixties. more…

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4 Comments
  • Soulwriter
    Wow. This is a truly touching and sad portrait. Very effective metaphor.
    LikeReply5 months ago
  • chellebelle77
    The personification of death as a cat is so wonderful. The cat-like behaviors picture perfect in my mind.
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Best wishes to your cousin (and her adopted cat) for a happy healthful life.
    LikeReply7 months ago
  • karlcfolkes
    What an intriguing poem about the intervening of imminent death in the presence of vibrant life as the poem describes in vivid language the intimate codependent relationship between the proverbial cat with nine lives and the cat’s frail mistress at 93 years old having already had ten times the portion of a cat’s proverbial nine lives and, as a feline, being a feisty ‘cat’ herself living out with exuberance her passion of love for her furry partner. 
    LikeReply 17 months ago
    • gbaranoff
      Thank you for your kind words and for picking up on the codependent relationship between my cousin and her cat, Bandito, a stray cat that forced his way into the family.
      LikeReply 27 months ago

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