I whispered to God I was more special



I whispered to God I was more special
That my meaning bridged more gaps than even he
I whispered to God my plan was more perfect
From each letter to my chartered course
I whispered to God my mind was more adept
That each fracture was a fragment of perfection
I whispered to God that I was incomparable
From the beat of my heart to the T in my surname
I whispered to God I was the better checker
That everything was related to my signs
I whispered to God that he loved me more
He whispered you can do better...
Font size:
Collection  PDF     
 

Written on November 14, 2023

Submitted by heathert.34240 on November 14, 2023

Modified by heathert.34240 on November 14, 2023

30 sec read
11

Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFAGHIJH
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 512
Words 103
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

All Heather Lydia Thornhill poems | Heather Lydia Thornhill Books

25 fans

Discuss the poem I whispered to God I was more special with the community...

1 Comment
  • Caliconine
    Your words are definitely art as well Beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Write On
    LikeReply5 months ago

Translation

Find a translation for this poem in other languages:

Select another language:

  • - Select -
  • 简体中文 (Chinese - Simplified)
  • 繁體中文 (Chinese - Traditional)
  • Español (Spanish)
  • Esperanto (Esperanto)
  • 日本語 (Japanese)
  • Português (Portuguese)
  • Deutsch (German)
  • العربية (Arabic)
  • Français (French)
  • Русский (Russian)
  • ಕನ್ನಡ (Kannada)
  • 한국어 (Korean)
  • עברית (Hebrew)
  • Gaeilge (Irish)
  • Українська (Ukrainian)
  • اردو (Urdu)
  • Magyar (Hungarian)
  • मानक हिन्दी (Hindi)
  • Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Italiano (Italian)
  • தமிழ் (Tamil)
  • Türkçe (Turkish)
  • తెలుగు (Telugu)
  • ภาษาไทย (Thai)
  • Tiếng Việt (Vietnamese)
  • Čeština (Czech)
  • Polski (Polish)
  • Bahasa Indonesia (Indonesian)
  • Românește (Romanian)
  • Nederlands (Dutch)
  • Ελληνικά (Greek)
  • Latinum (Latin)
  • Svenska (Swedish)
  • Dansk (Danish)
  • Suomi (Finnish)
  • فارسی (Persian)
  • ייִדיש (Yiddish)
  • հայերեն (Armenian)
  • Norsk (Norwegian)
  • English (English)

Citation

Use the citation below to add this poem to your bibliography:

Style:MLAChicagoAPA

"I whispered to God I was more special" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 27 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem/173742/i-whispered-to-god-i-was-more-special>.

Become a member!

Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

April 2024

Poetry Contest

Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
3
days
13
hours
30
minutes

Special Program

Earn Rewards!

Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

Browse Poetry.com

Quiz

Are you a poetry master?

»
"Twas brillig, and the slithy toves Did gyre and gimble in the wabe."
A Lewis Carroll
B Shel Silverstein
C Dr. Seuss
D Lord Byron