Colour of Pain



Blood rabbit runs down leg, burrowing beneath sole.
Sky bite bruises back, howling arch into roll.
Berry juice drilling loose ankle, hip, knee, live trine,
Tangle bramble on running tracks, entwining spine.
Angry sunset melts pelvis into puréed molten marrow.
Captured straiten’d mind, carted away in Satan’s barrow.
Black out brain, jarring jolts lashed by loud lights.
Gasping pig shouts, gnawing spirit of life’s fights.
Roadkill tears stalk chalk face frozen still in space.
Suspicious meadow of respite. Get set, sly pain race.

About this poem

I am owned by chronic pain every day. It’s hard to describe to someone what it looks like. This was my way to try and convey pain.

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Submitted by paul.marsden1968 on October 19, 2023

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Scheme AABBCCDDEE
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 539
Words 92
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10

Paul W. B. Marsden

I was born in rural Cheshire, England in 1968 and I studied civil engineering at university. I worked in construction, banking, and telecommunications before being elected to parliament in 1997 for the Labour Party at the age of 29. After 9/11, I rebelled over the war in Afghanistan and left the party. I rebelled again over the war in Iraq and recrossed the House of Commons - the first time since Winston Churchill. After leaving parliament in 2005, I worked as a director of policy for an animal charity, worked in a missile factory that sent munitions to Ukraine and I am the Head of Quality for a £5 billion rail improvement project in the north west of England. I have written poetry, short stories, local history books and technical books. My latest book, Philosophers and the Meaning of Life is due out early 2024, published by Imprint Academic. I have just finished writing Entente Cordiale of 20 Great Writers in the 19th Century. I am a fan of Liverpool Football Club. I am married to Elena and we live in north Wales. We have three grown up children. more…

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  • dante_unknown
    Interesting and exotic combination of words. Catches the attention and imagination.
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