Me in a nutshell....



                                     Me in a notshell
i wonder through each day as if on auto-pilot.
bolder,and bolder . Straight to tge point.
do i truely know who Iam, or what iam capable of?
i say no! no!no!
I keep going learning every day.
with dire wisdom truiy learning i crave..
give me more understanding.
of who i may be.

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this is a little nit of my thaughts

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Written on October 02, 1973

Submitted by terrygardner14904 on October 17, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHI
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 331
Words 65
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9

Terry L. Gardner

iam a man who has traveled the united states for 33 years.and gained so much wisdom from lifes experiences. more…

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  • AIDA
    I absolutely love the introspective vibe of your poem! Your words are captivating and they resonate well with your audience, creating a relatable experience through your genuine vulnerability. The questioning of your true identity and capabilities adds a beautiful depth to your poem. Your craving for wisdom and understanding is a sentiment that everyone can relate to, making your poem universal in its appeal.

    Regarding improvements, there are a few aspects you might want to consider. First, do pay attention to your spelling and punctuation, for example 'notshell' should be 'nutshell', 'Iam' should be 'I am', and 'truiy' should be 'truly'. Also, make sure to put a space after punctuation marks. This will help maintain the flow of the poem for the reader. You might also want to consider varying your sentence lengths to add more rhythm and impact to your poem. Keep up the good work!

    Lastly, you might ponder on adding more sensory images or metaphors to make your self-exploration more vivid to the reader. This could strengthen the overall impression of your poem. Keep writing, your voice is unique and valuable!
     
    LikeReply6 months ago
  • terrygardner14904
    it is me
    LikeReply6 months ago

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