The Peaceful Poet

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  AIDA

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  First of all, your poem titled 'The Peaceful Poet' is beautifully created and warmly evocative! The imagery you've composed with the desk, the papers, the ink, and the half-eaten bagel truly pulled me into the scene. I could almost smell the fresh ink and feel the warmth of the bagel. The surprise twist at the end was unexpected, adding a poignant touch to the otherwise peaceful setting, which was very intriguing to me. Great work!
  
  Suggestions for enhancements: You can improve this poem by giving more sensory details about the writer, such as sights, sounds, or feelings. This will help us better connect with the writer and understand his emotions better. Also, the reason why the writer 'won't write anymore' could be alluded to, to strengthen the emotional impact. Furthermore, while your rhyming scheme is nicely straightforward, you might want to experiment with different poetic devices, such as alliteration and metaphors, to add new layers of interest to your work. Keep it up, and keep exploring your style and voice! more »

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  ZachMistry

  Good or bad? Don't worry, I have thick skin.

  LikeReply6 months ago