Forever

Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)



So ever onward we sail

following currents
In the mainstream of existence

Led by motions
Which have been
both born and bred in spirit

By will act in an aura

Which prevails

despite one’s best attempts
to otherwise influence

That which truly is only
a pathway of destiny

Formed so perfectly

So elementally simplistic

Characteristically
undergoing Alteration

in continuity with laws
Naturalistically divine

Inspired in times
Oft unrepentantly by storm

Amidst seas of doubt

As to our most
Benevolent choices
In belief


The chosen fare well

Though wind

In waves
which dwarf

Any skillful influences

brought
More clearly into focus

As our sails
are filled

Thus,
we travel on

Forever

C2


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Submitted by Charles2 on October 08, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 751
Words 165
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 1, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 3, 1, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1

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