This GThis GAP from Where? Inside Us or from Others?? & to Where ??



This GAP from Where?
Inside Us or from Others??
& to Where ??
• I am sure; every one of us needs to find the right answer for this not only important & critical but so difficult question!!
• The gap we feel & live is Inside us or from others around us?
• But, to solve any problem, to know who is responsible for,
we have to relieve our mind from any depression!!
• & 1st we must get out of ourselves & at same time being us
• Our cure is in our hands, with peace of mind we can fight for what we want & also we can write our end by one impression
• So, we must not be blind, to see to where this gap will take us
 
• If it's inside us, because we were always & we'll still old..
• Or because other's feelings for us became too cold…
• So, we will remain living this gap for last inside us,
as we'll never change just to let them accepting us
• & if it's from others, coz we can't prove we're bold..
• Or because they hide their own truth that must be told..
• So, we will have one chance to not living this gap with them    if we try to satisfy them only to not let them rejecting us
• It's always Our Choice, but we have to be mature What We Need or To What they'll lead Us

About this poem

poem is about the Gap we feel between may between us & others .. or maybe gap we feel inside us between our heart & our mind .. our deed & our dreams we want to reach .. the gap is everywhere but how we can eliminate this gap to not feel it inside us ..

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Written on September 22, 2023

Submitted by rania_hosny12369 on October 05, 2023

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Scheme AXABCXBCBC DDCCDDCC
Closest metre Iambic octameter
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Words 251
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 8

Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan

Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan .. an egyptian poems writer "on line" & I published my 1st poem on line " falling down " on 2002 & win "award winning poet" Pin on 2012 from www.poetry.com "Rania Hosny Abdel Fattah Hassan" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2021. Web. 18 Feb. 2021. . more…

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