It looks like rain
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
Early today, bright this morning
just after i awoke
Washed my face, brushed my teeth
Sung to the amusement of the mirror
A song about a sweet relationship
i once had
As i shave away
yesterday’s growth,
while my hurt Feelings
sent me reeling,
in all
which it evoked
Stepped outside
to catch a smoke
Observed
a glorious sunrise unfolding,
A new opportunity
with something new,
Arriving over the horizon.
i felt ready for a new start,
come what may
Although, i had a funny feeling
This was not just going to be
Just another ordinary day
Gazing to the skies,
thin wispy clouds
Concentrations
of frozen condensation
Gathering in ever increasing
mass of random collections
of majestic floating
islands on parade
Building bolder, thicker, stronger
every moment
As darkening shadows
faded from white to gray
Gather deeper
as the skies become enraged
Distant lightning
flashes its dire warning
With thunder
chasing clouds further ahead
A strong wind falls
suddenly upon us
Scattering leaves,
every which way...
Smell a cool,
dampness in the air
Birds flying low,
seeking shelter
Sleeping street lights,
stagger back to life
Umbrellas
suddenly appear.
Seems like, Another
good day
to make the juke box Fill the air
with music of yesterdays
To fill the void with memories
Step away from this reality
Enjoy a beer or three
With a friend
i haven’t met
It looks like
rain
C2
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Written on 2015
Submitted by Charles2 on September 15, 2023
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