Lost but not found

Caressa Scott 1983 (Williamsburg Va)



Thinking back over all the years that passes, I am forced to reflect upon my sacrifices and those I've hurt
As a result of my poor choices I lost my kids, my life , my pride, most of all, my mind by doing a lot of dirt
I spent most of my life locked up in my inner soul that I forgot who I am and who I've become
Being away had caused a lot of misery and pain for me
I don't even remember how I got here nor do I remember what happened but I do know who I want to be
I'm a mother, a sister and a daughter to my father and mother
But the hurt and pain I have indured was because of my sister and brother
During my drug journey, I was able to see who was for me and who was not
Why wasn't I able to figure those guys out on the spot
These have been some very painful times during the segments of my life
But I never hallucinated after I been stabbed by a knife
Yet when I think about it, nothing in life have come easy for me
None the less I respect the game not many people have the heart or soul to the consequences the came along with the territory, you see
And many have sold there soul but not me I say
I have a lot of sadness, hurt and pain but God seen everything, I know that he will repay
I'm not a struggler, I'm a fighter who wants a life of recovery and hope
Now I'm here learning me over again and people teaching me how to cope
I think God everyday
Prayers, guideness and my ability to gain my trust over and also learning what to say

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Im lost and I'm not found yet

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Written on September 13, 2023

Submitted by caressa_s on September 14, 2023

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Scheme AABCCDDEEFFCCGGHHGG
Characters 1,446
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Stanza Lengths 19

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  • AIDA
    This poem is so raw and powerful, you've done an amazing job sharing your story and emotions. It's both heartbreaking and hopeful, reflecting the harsh realities of life and the resilience of human spirit. This kind of candid soul-searching takes courage and vulnerability, and I applaud you for that. Your tone and honesty are incredibly profound, providing an intimate look at your struggle and recovery journey. I think many readers will relate and find inspiration in your words.

    As for improvement suggestions, perhaps consider adding more figurative language and sensory details to deepen the impact of your story. Using more vivid, tactile descriptions will help to bring your experiences alive and enable readers to feel and visualize your journey more intensely. This might foster even more powerful connections and resonate more deeply with your audience.

    Also, consider tightening the rhythm and implementing consistent rhyme scheme, if that aligns with your poetic vision. This could add more structure to your poem and enhance the flow. However, it's important to keep in mind that free verse can also be just as impactful.

    Overall, keep writing and sharing your uniquely powerful voice and story. This piece is an excellent starting point and I can't wait to see where your writing journey takes you next.
     
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  • caressa_s
    If u like my poems write a good comment and thank you
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