Butt naked
Charles Fields II 1955 (Fort Bragg, NC)
(Will this be you and me?)
When we started
our streets were paved with gold
Everything good rained upon us
With potential of the highest degree
Each day filled with endless possibility
We were positive there were no limits
To a place in this world
where we might come to be
There was not anything
worthy of the effort
To produce the necessary
focus and drive
with an intensity
to fashion a design
no short of amazing
in fulfilling its purpose
with economy Versatility
With minimal waste
While maximizing efficiency
Little we could envision
our spirit Would leave
short of excellent
in every degree
Not to find
worthy to complete
Or leave lost or broken
for what purposes
of what endless possibilities
We could call to mind,
imagine or perceive
there was no limit
to the potential
of our strategy
Or weakness
in what we could do together
So strong
was our faith and belief
Never wasn't ever
even possible
nor fear or failure
entered in our blog
of loving life
for us, here was only
calm compassionate verse
Even at our worst
we were together
in spirit and deed
We were never further
than the need for loving comfort
Even closer than someone
dedicated to the purpose
doing something that they love
In our vocabulary There was
no such word as weak
Misunderstanding
was the greatest thief
to rob us of
the best of our intentions
to be loving life together
forever and a day
For the balance of eternity
Rather than losing it all
falling from heaven's smiles
and joyful laughter
At our worst mistakes
Instead of mired
in sorrow
Sad and lonely
Even when we're together
leaving us only
smoldering in the ashes
overcome with disbelief
Gazing into the mirror
at our greatest foe
Doing our best attempt
at damage control
While feeling helpless
swimming against a rip tide
drowning in our sorrows
Lost in the chaos
with senseless echoes
of anguished screams
For a more merciful solution
Instead of feeling trapped
A hapless prisoner
of recurrent dreams
Of self-defeat
C2
Copyright ©2023 CEF2
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Written on 2018
Submitted by Charles2 on September 12, 2023
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