Two Dylan’s and My Movie



Two Dylan’s and My Movie

If life is a movie, I’m obsessed with the ending
Especially as the end-credits approach, with the dying of the light
But on this you can bet, as I’m not quite there yet
I’ll not be going gentle into anyone’s good night
I suspect that it is not death that most of us fear
More likely obscurity, disinterest, forgotten next year
To have lived a life that evoked no recollection
Is the bane of existence – and St. Peter’s rejection
Whatever to do?  There is one thing that’s true
We create our legacy while living….
And we earn our cosmic affection.

Bob Dylan wrote “He who is not busy being born is busy dying”
Dylan Thomas reminds us we are all dying, and to never ever stop trying
Like many, I squandered Act 1 of my cinematic script
Caught up in the minutia, for empathy/sympathy ill-equipped
But better reborn late than not at all,
I’m rewriting my script with this clarion call
My movie’s recast – with new lines, and old characters past
The ending’s rewritten – cast mates & viewers hopefully smitten
They may love or hate me - but memories of this sequel are built to last

About this poem

I've written twenty or thirty poems since retiring from some interesting jobs - many of which required professional writing. More legal than poetic. A common theme of most of my poems is the pondering of our impact (not necessarily familial) on those with whom we cross paths in one way or another..

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Written on 2023

Submitted by jimwhite.noise on August 22, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X ABXBCCDDXAD AAEEFFGDG
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,140
Words 209
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 11, 9

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