The Tumultuous Soup



A tumultuous soup I find myself in
A bubbling broth, hostile and hot
I pull myself up, clinging onto the brim
Only to slip back down into the pot

I battle to reach the froth at the top
But alas, relief is not found
My head in a bubble, reluctant to pop
My dread and despair compound

As I flap in the gloop devoid of a plan
My body begins to tire
I know I must find a way out if I can
Before the soul I’ve been gifted expires

My plight is shared with others too
United, we could find a way
But all seem content to wither and stew
Whilst ignorance masks their decay

A malevolent hand then turns up the heat
Its possessor I cannot quite place
He cackles and snorts as he makes his retreat
With his back turned, I can’t see his face

I have nothing but anger and utter contempt
For this fiend, this boiler of souls
So I steel myself for a last-ditch attempt
To escape from his crippling control

I push and heave and grab and grasp
For rage is the source of my power
Propelled I rise up, and out with a gasp
This must be my finest hour!

But there’s no time to lose, for the chef will return
So I look to the window ajar
I peer through the glass, seeing all that I yearn
And dive out like a cannon-shot star!

I flee forest-bound, from my tormentor’s lair
But my senses compel me to turning
Aghast, I see flames rising up through the air
It’s the kitchen ferociously burning!

In my haste to escape the maniacal cook
When through the window I dove
The curtain must have been torn from its hook
And descended down onto the stove!

A figure appears through the black smokey mist
A face contorted with rage
It’s the cook at the window shaking his fist
Like a demon confined to a cage

For my path of escape is not open to him
The result of his sheer bulk and size
His lip-smacking gorging on helpless victims
Deems him maker of his demise!

I turn from the blaze, finally free
To follow the dreams I’d misplaced
But what of the one who has so plagued me?
His medicine now he must taste!

Do I make an attempt to rescue my foe
To extinguish the fire somehow?
Unlucky for him, the answer is no
For I recognise him now

It is HE who’s been haunting my life like a ghost
And weighing me down all these years
He has but one name familiar to most
His name? His name is Fear.

About this poem

This poem relates to an epiphany I had a few years ago. I suddenly realised that most of the difficulties and disappointments I’d had ever since I was a child all shared the same root cause.

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Written on 2023

Submitted by adam.gutteridge on August 21, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA CDCD EFEX GHGH IJIJ KXKX LFLF MNMN OPOP QXQX RSRS BTXT UVUV WXWX YXYX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,293
Words 480
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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