The Pastiche of J. Alfred Prufrock



Come with me, just you and me,
As the dawn awakes the morning
As it leaps onto its lap and rubs its nose, harder and harder still, gently persistent
Come with me through too - bright streets
The anxious entrances , still - closed shops and stores,
Dark, and for the moment, abandoned,
And you start to wonder…
Don’t ask where we’re going, just follow me there

In the hall students wander through,
Speaking of the morning dew

And there will be hope,
Wonderful, glorious, intimate hope,
Hope for children and times to come,
For breakfast, lunch and everyone,

And I will lack faith,
And obsess with how they speak,
Are they laughing at me?
It must be my hair, frizzled in the heat,
But there will be hope,
There will always be hope; I know,
I have stirred my future with tablespoons
And threatened it with butter knives, beneath the moon

But there will be hope, generations to come,
Parents will read their children tales of bravery and courage
To inspire such hope, instill it in their youth

But I do not think I will have any more stories read to me

I’ve seen them walking, hand in hand,
Their lives, they know, just began,
And we scramble to stay there, there with our lives just begun,
Until experience withers us and we die

About this poem

I wrote this pastiche when I had recently discovered, devoured and dissected The Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock by TS Eliot. Highly recommend reading it as a companion to this pastiche if it is unfamiliar.

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Written on 2012

Submitted by ilovewrighting on August 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXXXXXX BB CCDE XXAXCXXX DXX A XXEX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,256
Words 253
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 8, 2, 4, 8, 3, 1, 4

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  • Jewoo525
    The palpable imagery is what got me, the really excellent choice in metaphor to compare things to, and just when I would process how clever it was the poem would drag me along to the next moment/stanza. The flow of the poem is aided by precisely the kind of surreal scene it describes, a good parallel to the themes it's musing on. Perhaps as a commentary on how we are so busy living we forget that we are alive... I really enjoyed reading it and it taught me a lot about how to set up imagery without necessarily needing to be "painfully descriptive.” Like: don’t narrate how course each grain of sand was on the beach, rather, try to explicate how the beach would feel if you called it that.

    Really well-written poem. I’m not familiar with J. Alfred Prufrock, but perhaps if I were, this poem would resonate in a different way- I’m in. I love this poem. Looking forward to more work from you, keep writing.
     
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