Remorse

Skye Walsh 2001 (Salt Lake City)



Tender spots and aching hearts.

You shot me dead,

crescents red.

Bleeding through the

blinding shiny snow,

melting to the ocean shore.

All you are now is

the color of remorse



Wonderful and mystical,

never felt it at all.

Afterlife’s identical



to fire flies in white daylight

crashing in-

to satellites.

Drinking through the

Wispy tipsy gin.

Locked away in my head again

now their inner light is,

the color of remorse

About this poem

Betrayal will forever kill one’s desire to forgive the unforgivable, no matter how sorry they seem. From pain, euphoric strength of rediscovering one’s passion for life is born. Yet, pain and pleasure shall always be funny cycle.

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Written on April 08, 2023

Submitted by awal9467542 on August 30, 2023

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Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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