Analysis of Remorse

Skye Walsh 2001 (Salt Lake City)



Tender spots and aching hearts.

You shot me dead,

Bleeding through the

blinding shiny snow,

melting to the ocean shore.

All you are now is

the color of remorse

Wonderful and mystical,

never felt it at all.

to fire flies in white daylight

Drinking through the

Wispy tipsy gin.

Locked away in my head again

now their inner light is,

the color of remorse


Scheme x x a x x b C x x x a x x b C
Poetic Form Tetractys  (33%)
Metre 1010101 1111 1010 10101 1010101 11111 010101 1000100 101111 1101011 1010 10101 10101101 111011 010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 443
Words 106
Sentences 7
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 4

About this poem

Betrayal will forever kill one’s desire to forgive the unforgivable, no matter how sorry they seem. From pain, euphoric strength of rediscovering one’s passion for life is born. Yet, pain and pleasure shall always be funny cycle.

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Written on April 08, 2023

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