Note to dad



When I became a dad...
I realized
how wrong I was,
To you
As a son.
I yelled and screamed...
For days on end.
And said the things
No dad should hear
From a loved one.

Though I can never take,
Those moments
Back.
Nor can I lessen
In any way,
The pain I caused.
I want to thank you dad
For being
My dear friend.
Though we both know,
It was clearly
Undeserved.

About this poem

The poem was written on the back of an argument with my son reflecting back to how much I misunderstood and how little I valued what my dad had done for me.

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Written on August 07, 2023

Submitted by michaelp.54376 on August 06, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXXBXCXXB XXXBXXAXCXXX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 365
Words 92
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 10, 12

Michael Perper

I came to America at age 10 from Uzbekistan. On my life journey to date I have been a high school Math Teacher, a Programmer, and now an IT Analyst. My main role however is and will be that of a dad. I have a beautiful 6 year old boy and a little girl on the way. They both truly take up the most luxurious space within my heart. more…

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