God please



God please don’t let the
Devil take me,
He’s been inside my dreams
And I have no idea
What he’s planning,
What if when I wake,
He’s still inside my head?
And from the inside out
He’s destructing me,
What if I become corrupt?
Will I be too far gone
And too out of reach
Of  saving?
He might set my whole
Mind on fire,
What if when I wake,
I’ll only see red
Because the inside of
My head Is blazing?
Maybe I’m paranoid,
But what if his plan
Is to drive me crazy?
He’s entered the vulnerability
Of my dreams,
And soon he’ll invade my thoughts
And I’ll have nothing to
Return to safely,
What if I die in my sleep?
Will anyone even know
That the Devil
Succeeded in his attempts
To break me,
I know that i'm supposed to pray
But it might be too late,
Will you give up
On my rescue
And forsake me?
Im scared that the light
Is out of reach,
I have no idea where
His darkness may take me,
Should I fight?
Or give up?
Will I be judged
If I give in to the enemy?
God please don’t let
The Devil take me,
He’s probably in my head
By now,
And I have no idea
What he’s planning

About this poem

This poem is about a nightmare I had once. This poem describes the fear and thoughts I had after experiencing this dream

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Written on July 23, 2023

Submitted by queenbre023 on August 23, 2023

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