Analysis of God please



God please don’t let the
Devil take me,
He’s been inside my dreams
And I have no idea
What he’s planning,
What if when I wake,
He’s still inside my head?
And from the inside out
He’s destructing me,
What if I become corrupt?
Will I be too far gone
And too out of reach
Of  saving?
He might set my whole
Mind on fire,
What if when I wake,
I’ll only see red
Because the inside of
My head Is blazing?
Maybe I’m paranoid,
But what if his plan
Is to drive me crazy?
He’s entered the vulnerability
Of my dreams,
And soon he’ll invade my thoughts
And I’ll have nothing to
Return to safely,
What if I die in my sleep?
Will anyone even know
That the Devil
Succeeded in his attempts
To break me,
I know that i'm supposed to pray
But it might be too late,
Will you give up
On my rescue
And forsake me?
Im scared that the light
Is out of reach,
I have no idea where
His darkness may take me,
Should I fight?
Or give up?
Will I be judged
If I give in to the enemy?
God please don’t let
The Devil take me,
He’s probably in my head
By now,
And I have no idea
What he’s planning


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Poetic Form
Metre 11110 1011 110111 0111010 1110 11111 110111 010011 10101 1110101 111111 01111 110 11111 1110 11111 11011 010011 11110 10110 11111 111110 110000100 111 0110111 011101 01110 1111011 110101 1010 0100101 111 11110111 111111 1111 1110 0011 11101 1111 1110101 110111 111 111 1111 111010100 1111 01011 1100011 11 0111010 1110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,097
Words 252
Sentences 11
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 51
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 804
Words per stanza (avg) 220

About this poem

This poem is about a nightmare I had once. This poem describes the fear and thoughts I had after experiencing this dream

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Written on July 23, 2023

Submitted by queenbre023 on August 23, 2023

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