VULNERABILITY IN MOTHERHOOD



Running away, heart in the freezer,
I know that feeling, that language you speak.
I too resisted, refused to feel,
Until motherhood's touch made it real.

Into the abyss, I took the dive,
To those tender parts where emotions thrive.
Vulnerability, now my proud embrace,
A journey of heart, at its gentle pace.

A child's love, it grips and aches,
Commanding all, whatever it takes.
Every breath, all that I do,
Wrapped in love, forever true.

When it's for her, the world turns faint,
Opinions shrink, as love paints.
I stand strong, love's fierce defender,
My universe transformed by her tender splendor.

Boundaries forged, confronting old pain,
Past traumas faced, like healing rain.
A better self emerges through,
Motherhood's art, breaking and making anew.

About this poem

This is a poem on how motherhood brings your vulnerable side out.

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Submitted by Liza.Njeri1 on August 17, 2023

Modified by Liza.Njeri1 on August 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXBB CCDD EEFF XXAA GGFF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 761
Words 147
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • Charles2
    A stirring view of motherhood with love as the foundation.
    LikeReply7 months ago

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