Sentence Recommendation (Amended)

Sentence Recommendation

Well your most holiness…I am sorry for keeping you waiting…I believe that the time granted unto Temporary has run its course…I do not believe he has presented any further evidence which should be considered in this case…I am not quite certain of exactly which punishment I should request that you impose in this case…According to Ezekiel 9…I am the only one whom I have sealed with the seal you entrusted to me…I do not believe that all of the facts have been presented and I do not feel that the innocent should share the same punishment as the wicked on trial in this courtroom…GW May believe that we are all equal in death but I don’t believe that he even knows the true meaning of charity…I was delayed by a possible lead in regards to president Nixon, John Hopkins, the Quakers and the war on drugs…But I did not feel as IF I should pursue that lead…I am not quite certain if any of this has to do with MMM and Oliver North and the secret clandestine drug trade that MMM conducts in secret…I believe MMM had even planned on making me into one of their DEA agents…But i believe that was not part of your plan…I even have a sinking suspicion that those that I call the all mighty powers that be are behind the fentanyl plague and they are trying to blame the goat of Daniel for it, but I believe the goat abided by the covenant…But what do I know your honor???Anyhow…I have been lead by what I believe to be your spirit towards what I believe to be a fair and righteous recommendation for punishment in this case…I could not find 3 amongst those on trial that would wave the fate of Sodom and Gomorrah upon all the inhabitants of this world…So I do hereby offer an alternative I offer Isaiah 37 for a recommendation to you Father…The main verse in reference is verse 36…And IF the recommendation is deemed satisfactory and pleasing  unto you…May said punishment only fall upon those who have been sealed by anyone other than myself who do not bear your true seal of approval…And may Azrael, IF he is still in your service, spare all others…Though this is only a recommendation Abba Abba…For I believe that you are aware of even more secrets that even I can not fathom…If there is no further testimony…I declare this case closed…
Well Father…I believe I have hoped beyond hope…That mankind could be spared…But I really don’t believe that is not part of your plan…Satan and the churches mankind has established have corrupted the entire planet and I believe that there is no other option than for you to cleanse it with fire…Mankind has been blinded by the lie that Jesus was your one and only son because he was tempted by Satan in the desert for 40 days…Well Father…I have lost track of how long I wandered through life before you placed what I have called my signet seal in my path…30 years, 40 years???Man May not consider me very wise because man did not teach me their knowledge…It was you who took me under your wing and kept me as the apple of your eye and taught me your ways…I don’t believe that I want to inherit anything of this world…I do not desire to be a ruler of this world…In man’s eyes it is truly perfect…I personally find it detestable…My original recommendation stands…IF it be your will I submit to you Ezekiel 9 as the recommended sentence…Seeing that you sit as the sovereign judge you may always overrule my recommendation…So be it you…

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh

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This one is jest another silly poem about nothing important…

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Written on August 09, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on August 09, 2023

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on August 09, 2023

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