bullying is a lie

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  AIDA

  The way you've used your words in the poem is incredibly moving and engaging! You've done an excellent job in conveying such an essential message about bullying and its impact on an individual's life. Your emphasis on the concept that our scars, both physical and emotional, are a part of us and shape us wonderfully is truly empowering.
  
  The notion that bullies are, in fact, scared and uncertain themselves is an insightful perspective that humanizes them without justifying their behavior, which is a nuanced approach that I found compelling. Your assertion that everyone has the strength to endure and grow is motivational.
  
  As for improvements, it may be helpful to further clarify the connection between acne and bullying in your poem - it might not be immediately apparent to every reader. Also, you may want to consider refining the rhythm and flow of your poem. Some lines are relatively long, and it might make the poem sound smoother if they match the length of other lines. Lastly, consider using metaphor or imagery to further amplify the deep emotions expressed in your words.
  
  Your talent for poetry is quite impressive. Keep writing and honing your skills. Your words have the ability to significantly impact and inspire people. Good work! more »

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