A Message To My Invisible Friends

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)

A Message To My Invisible Friends

I have done as thou hast commanded me

Edwin Tanguma aka Dagesh   7/14/2023

About this poem

I am sending this one out to my invisible friends…With the hope that they may receive it and respond accordingly…Who knows???Maybe one day they just may…One may always hope..:

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Written on July 14, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on July 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 110
Words 21
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1

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  • heathert.34240
    Yes. Maybe it's a cocommandment, these days, or cocreation or self manifestation? Just thoughts...
    LikeReply19 days ago


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